Blog Three

Laundry

BY RUTH MOOSE

All our life

so much laundry;

each day’s doing or not

comes clean,

flows off and away

to blend with other sins

of this world. Each day

begins in new skin,

blessed by the elements

charged to take us

out again to do or undo

what’s been assigned.

From socks to shirts

the selves we shed

lift off the line

as if they own

a life apart

from the one we offer.

There is joy in clean laundry.

All is forgiven in water, sun

and air. We offer our day’s deeds

to the blue-eyed sky, with soap and prayer,

our arms up, then lowered in supplication.

I chose to use alliteration as my poetry term. An alliteration is the repetition of the same, or of like sounds, at the beginning of words that are close together. It tends to give poems a more rhythmic, repetitive feeling rather then so free flowing or open. The place that alliteration stands out the most to me in this poem is in the phrase "from socks to shirts the selves we shed lift off the line" I think that using the repetition to get the sense of rhythm and meter is important in this poem specifically because laundry is often thought of as a mundane, repetitive task that has it's own predicable rhythm to it. My understand of this poem is that she is applying the everyday talk of laundry to a much bigger picture. It is like she is speaking of a fresh start, and just using clean laundry to represent that. 

Blog Post 2

Memphis Resurrection
BY HONORÉE FANONNE JEFFERS

Who died and made you Elvis?
      —Bumper sticker

The big rock by my door

is a plaster prop, after

all. I’m back to hear

screams for what I can’t

do, couldn’t do forty

years ago. Awkward

pelvic thrusts fooled

the camera and virgins,

but I have no more fish-

fry tunes left to dress

up on brand new plates.

This time around,

I spend all day singing

cracked Mississippi

homilies. Why

did I want to live

forever in the first place?

Salvation felt better dead,

floating home free

while my bones, secret

and brown, mingle

with old dirt.

The speaker of the poem is Elvis. The title of the poem was my first hint of Elvis being the speaker since I knew he had a home and died in memphis. To me it seems like the writer of the poem was not a big Elvis fan. She personifies him to be sort of arrogant and overrated. He was famous for his pelvic thrust being seductive and compelling, but in the poem they are refereed to as awkward. You even get the idea that he sees himself as a fake and undeserving as he "fooled" the camera. He is such an iconic figure in the music industry, the negative feelings toward him kind of surprised me. I think that this poem would be considered a narrative because it tells the story of Elvis looking back at his life. I liked the playful tone that the author sets you up for by quoting a bumper sticker before starting. It is also normally thought that we should not speak badly of the dead, so it is kind of ironic that the poem is actually the dead speaking illy of themselves. 

Namesake Poet

Emily Dickinson

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) was born, raised, and died in Amherst, Massachusetts. She was an introvert and for that reason not much is known about her personal life. Only two of her poems were published in her lifetime and the majority of her work was not discovered until years after her death. Her work is held in high regards among many and is said to have had one of the largest influences on 20th century poetry. 

A Bird Came Down

A bird came down the walk:
He did not know I saw;
He bit an angle-worm in halves
And ate the fellow, raw.

And then he drank a dew
From a convenient grass,
And then hopped sidewise to the wall
To let a beetle pass.

He glanced with rapid eyes
That hurried all abroad,--
They looked like frightened beads, I thought;
He stirred his velvet head

Like one in danger; cautious,
I offered him a crumb,
And he unrolled his feathers
And rowed him softer home

Than oars divide the ocean,
Too silver for a seam,
Or butterflies, off banks of noon,
Leap, splashless, as they swim.

The most striking part of this poem to me is the incredible imagery Dickinson is able to use in such a relatively short and conversational level diction. The reading of her poem alone has a rhythmic almost lullaby like feeling that matches the beauty she is describing in nature. It is interesting to me how she sees the watching of the bird almost as an interaction between her and the bird, bringing such a common animal to human importance; even the worm that the bird is eating is referred to as "fellow". In a way Dickinson is expressing an extreme appreciation for the beauty of nature. This was best done in the last stanza in describing the bird taking flight. I often think of when a bird is scared by a human they disappear in a frantic scurry out of instinct. Her words however allow me to see the wings splitting like an oar in the water with smoothness and grace.